diff --git a/releasenotes/notes/release-summary-c837becc3ca39fd4.yaml b/releasenotes/notes/release-summary-c837becc3ca39fd4.yaml
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--- a/releasenotes/notes/release-summary-c837becc3ca39fd4.yaml
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@@ -1,28 +1,31 @@
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 prelude: >
-    The StarlingX Metal project is a new repository that manages lifecycle of
-    Host and its operation and administration, it also provides Host fault
-    monitoring, alarming and initiates fault recovery.
+    The StarlingX Metal project is a new repository that manages the lifecycle,
+    operation, and administration of the Host.  StarlingX Metal also provides
+    Host fault monitoring, alarms, and initiates fault recovery.
 features:
   - |
-    Manages the life cycle of the host.
+    Manages the life cycle of the Host.
   - |
-    Detects and automatically handles host failures and initiates recovery.
+    Detects and automatically handles host failures and initiates host recovery.
   - |
-    Monitor & Alarm & Recover:
+    Monitors, Alarming, and Recovery for the following:
 
-    - Cluster connectivity, critical process failures.
-    - Resource utilization thresholds, interface states.
-    - H/W fault / sensors, host watchdog.
+    - Cluster connectivity.
+    - Critical process failures.
+    - Resource utilization thresholds.
+    - Interface states.
+    - H/W fault / sensors.
+    - Host watchdog.
     - Activity progress reporting (e.g. booting, testing).
   - |
-    Interfaces with board management (BMC) for out of band reset, power-on/off
-    and H/W sensor monitoring.
+    Provides an interface with board management (BMC) for out-of-band reset,
+    power-on/off, and H/W sensor monitoring.
   - |
-    Publishes host state with other StarlingX Components.
+    Publishes the Host's state with other StarlingX components.
   - |
-    Exposes a set of administrative commands for the user to manage the host
-    via REST API:
+    Exposes a set of administrative commands for the user to manage the Host
+    through REST API:
 
     - Lock/unlock, reboot, reset, re-install, SWACT.
-    - Out-of-Band via BMC: Reboot, reset, power on/off.
+    - Out-of-band via BMC: Reboot, reset, power on/off.