From ab474967520f48860b8fe3749fa3fedaffe6c0aa Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Scott Rifenbark Date: Wed, 17 Oct 2018 16:30:21 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] Grammar edit on the release notes. Minor edits for readability. Change-Id: I1c10c43b241cdd0a690d61805b89e0c065672d52 Signed-off-by: Scott Rifenbark --- ...se-summary-stx201810-f93eaece62df65f5.yaml | 22 ++++++++++--------- 1 file changed, 12 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-) diff --git a/releasenotes/notes/release-summary-stx201810-f93eaece62df65f5.yaml b/releasenotes/notes/release-summary-stx201810-f93eaece62df65f5.yaml index 9c3bd527..a2dc61fb 100644 --- a/releasenotes/notes/release-summary-stx201810-f93eaece62df65f5.yaml +++ b/releasenotes/notes/release-summary-stx201810-f93eaece62df65f5.yaml @@ -4,27 +4,29 @@ prelude: > Log Reporting Services for other StarlingX Components. features: - | - Framework for infrastructure services via a client API to: + Framework for infrastructure services through a client API to do + the following: - - Set, clear and query customer alarms. + - Set, clear, and query customer alarms. - Generate customer logs for significant events. - | - Framework maintains an Active Alarm List. + Framework to maintain an Active Alarm List. - | Active Alarm Counts Banner on Horizon GUI. - | - Framework provides REST API to query alarms & events and also publish - through SNMPv2c Traps. + Framework to provide REST API to query alarms and events and also + publishes through SNMPv2c Traps. - | Support for Alarm suppression. - | - Operator Alarms: + Operator Alarms on the following: - - On Platform Nodes & Resources. - - On Hosted Virtual Resources ( i.e. VMs, Volumes, Networks). + - Platform Nodes and Resources. + - Hosted Virtual Resources (i.e. VMs, Volumes, and Networks). - | Operator Logs - Event List: - Logging of Set/Clears of Alarms. - - Related to Platform Nodes & Resources. - - Related to Hosted Virtual Resources ( i.e. VMs, Volumes, Networks). + - Related to Platform Nodes and Resources. + - Related to Hosted Virtual Resources (i.e. VMs, Volumes, and + Networks).