Update patch set 1

Patch Set 1: Code-Review-1

(7 comments)

Hi Bruce,

Thank you for uploading the initial governance document for review. I added a few comments in line to fix before we merge this version and start iterating on it.

Please let me know if you have any question on it.

Thanks and Best Regards,
Ildikó

Patch-set: 1
Label: Code-Review=-1

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+      "message": "I suggest to add \u0027- DRAFT\u0027 to the title.\n\nWe don\u0027t have the full appointed TSC group yet to approve and there are also some inconsistencies/open question to sort out in the document before we can call it official.",
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+      "message": "As we store documentation in git too we may want to say \u0027code and documentation changes\u0027 here.",
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